SACRIFICE PART 3: Going as Planed

Both Kida and Proteus ran inside and realised what was happening...the whole palace was collapsing.
"We need to get everyone out NOW" said Sinbad as he ran towards Proteus.
"But the door is blocked how are we going to get everyone out-" said Proteus
"GUYS i found a secret tunnel that can get EVERYONE out come on" shouted Meg from across the room.
"ALL RIGHT EVERYONE FOLLOW MEG INTO THE TUNNEL!" shouted Proteus. Everyone then run into the tunnel. After mostly everyone got out Proteus grabbed Kida's hand and run towards the tunnel.
"Is everyone out?!" asked Proteus
"Ya i think so." answered Meg
"WAIT WERE'S SINBAD!?" screamed Kida. Proteus looked back and didn't see Sinbad who he thought was right behind him. He felted a led ball drop in his stomach.
"SINBAD! I've got to find him!" shouted Proteus
"NO YOU CAN'T" screamed Kida as she grabbed Proteus's arm.
"KIDA" Proteus quickly turned and looked into her eye's. He could see that she was scared.
"Kida...i have to save him" said Proteus. He then runs of into the crumbling palace. Meg then grabs Kida and they walk into the tunnel.
"SINBAD" Proteus was dogging the rocks that were falling from the ceiling.
"SINBAAAAAAAD"
"PROTEUS OVER HERE" shouted Sinbad. Proteus hear and spirited towards were he was. When he found himhe was stuck under a pillar.
"GOD SINBAD! are you ok?!" asked Proteus as he started to lift the pillar.
"RRRRA" Sinbad helped Proteus lift the pillar. they got the pillar high enough so that Sinbad could slip out. He did.
"AH MY LEG" screamed Sinbad. Proteus picked him up and the started to walk back to the tunnel. They were half wat there when suddenly Proteus looked up and sow that the roof was going to collapse he know's that there too slow, they'll never make it.
"Sinbad..." said Proteus. Sinbad turned his head to look at Proteus.
"Ya bud" said Sinbad. Hearing that made this even more harder.
"I wanted to tell you that your my best friend and that i want you to take good care of Kida" Proteus then threw Sinbad towards the tunnel and away form the ceiling. Just then the ceiling came down on Proteus and it all went dark...and just like that everything stopped. After the dust cleared Sinbad looked up and sow the pile of rocks were Proteus was.
"PROTEUUUUUS" shouted Sinbad. Meg and Kida then run up from the tunnel.
"OH MY GOD SINBAD ARE YOU OK" shouted Meg
"I'M FINE GET PROTEUS" shouted Sinbad
"Where is he" asked Kida
"HE'S UNDER THE ROCKS HURRY" Meg and Kida ran over and started to move the rocks away. Sinbad hears Kida gasp and freeze.
"What whats wrong" asked Sinbad. A rock fell to show Proteus's hand, Sinbad sow it and sow how it was gray and lifeless.
"no..." Sinbad whispered to himself. Meg turned and walked towards Sinbad and looked at him with sadness in her eyes.
"...please..." pleased Sinbad. Meg looked at him and shoke her head.
"no..please PLEASE NO" Sinbad couldn't believe that Proteus...his best friend...was dead.

this one's the longest out of them all but i love it and i hope you'll like it to

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